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Expert college essay coaching to help students write their best for the admissions audience.

“The essays can be the most important components of your application.”

—Johns Hopkins University Admissions

In a highly-competitive field, Success Story offers coaching and a personalized writing workshop to help students

  • Write outstanding essays sharing their authentic self
  • Share best qualities that match what schools want
  • Find the right stories to tell
  • Structure their time to finish essays
  • Master techniques for future college writing

Here’s what students accomplish with Success Story

  • Work on a weekly schedule with tasks tailored to students’ writing needs. I set students up on an efficient schedule with individualized exercises and tasks, designed to help a student generate ideas, work quickly, and draft with purpose and audience in mind. Deadlines are the same times, twice a week ,so work doesn’t haunt them daily and parents know when to check. The once-weekly coaching sessions teach writing strategies and help students do revisions.
  • Pick unique incidents that colleges want to know. I help students select stories that best represent them, showcase skill sets that set them apart, and share future plans. We discuss accomplishments and qualities that match the school profile while also showing the multifaceted interests and experiences of each student.
  • Write compelling, convincing essays. I help students create a narrative arc and/or montage of stories that engage a reader. We find striking details that resonate with readers. I ask questions that help a student explain to schools why these details matter. During our conversations, students discover the themes and values that direct their lives and find ways to name them. We discuss how to make a reader forget they’re reading–and then make it happen.
  • Implement meaningful feedback. My detailed line edits address everything: evidence, claims, storytelling strategies, grammar and mechanics. We revise, a lot! I help students wherever they are take their writing to the next level.

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About Lyn Hawks,owner of Success Story

LynAs a Stanford graduate, as an experienced English teacher who has coached students from competitive public and private schools with their essays, as an expert in gifted education, and as an award-winning young adult fiction author, I know what stories get the attention of universities. I help talented students use powerful storytelling strategies to share their accomplishments, personality, and character to colleges. [READ MORE...]

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Testimonials from Clients

“Mrs. Hawks' coaching highlights the individual story and encourages applicants to be authentic in their essays.”
—Rachel, Elon University


“Lyn offers rich wisdom and honesty. After working with her on my essays, I gained a greater sense of self and belief in my capabilities. Lyn was an integral part of my admission to college.”
—Henry, DePaul University graduate


"Lyn did an amazing job helping my daughter choose the best prompts that drew out her true self. Lyn was so encouraging and knew how to inspire my 17-year-old."
—Amy, parent

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