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Success Story provides coaching services for college application essays and scholarship essays. A student emerges with takeaway skills: replicable strategies, methods, and tips useful for these essays as well as high school and college writing.

Do you need a unique plan that doesn’t fit those listed below? Do you have special requests for specific types of support?

  • Whether a modified version of a plan below, from one hour of draft review to several hours customized to a student’s particular needs, Success Story can assist.
  • Reach out to request more information and service package or hourly rates for special circumstances or particular needs.

$1400 – $2100

Have you already started first drafts and need two or three weeks of support? Do you work well independently? Do you want to move essays from early drafts to polished drafts? Do you need feedback in a short period of time?

  • Live and asynchronous support over 2 or 3 weeks: 1-2 hours of live coaching per week and several hours of asynchronous support (feedback on drafts twice a week, email updates and encouragement, edits, etc.).
  • Weekly personalized live coaching via Zoom: exercises, lessons, feedback, and mentoring through the writing process
  • Weekly deadlines to stay on track
  • Detailed developmental feedback (line edits and narrative summary with next steps)
  • Grammar and mechanics feedback on any drafts considered close to complete
  • Success Story workbook strategy exercises and essay models, personalized to student needs
  • Recommended amount of essays to address in 2-3 weeks: 5 to 7. Highly-motivated students may be able to address more. Timeframe can be extended if needed.

$2800 – $5600

Do you need help selecting your essay topics? Do you need help brainstorming and planning an essay? This plan helps you choose topics, build substantive notes and outlines, and begin drafting. It’s a great deal for students who want support with launching the process.

  • Live and asynchronous support for 4 – 8 weeks: 1-2 hours of live coaching per week and several hours of asynchronous support (feedback on drafts twice a week, email updates and encouragement, edits, etc.).
  • Weekly personalized live coaching via Zoom: exercises, lessons, feedback, and mentoring through the writing process
  • Weekly deadlines and reminders to stay on track
  • Weekly, detailed feedback on brainstorming, outlines, and first and second drafts
  • Weekly detailed feedback (line edits and narrative summary with next steps)
  • Success Story workbook brainstorming materials, strategy exercises, and essay models, personalized to student needs
  • Recommended amount of essays to address in 4-8 weeks: 3 to 5. Timeframe can be extended if needed.

$500

Need one or more essays looked at quickly in a four-day period while developing valuable revision skills? This package is a great deal for a family with a tight timeline and/or a limited budget, and a self-starter student who already has drafts complete. This package is ideal for students with second or third drafts needing more revision.

  • Feedback on draft #3 (or later) of essays. Feedback includes multiple line edits per page and narrative summary.
  • Daily review in the four-day period; students receive new comments by the afternoon of each day. Students are recommended to have four days set aside in order to respond with revisions to daily comments. Students receive a total of 5 reviews.
  • Notes regarding grammar and proofreading also provided.
  • Limited to 5 essays or 2000 words total.
  • Success Stories Method strategy handouts and model essays provided as needed.
  • Note: this plan doesn’t work for students who need help getting started or who have a first draft.
  • More here on the Draft Review process and expectations.

Ask about Success Story fall scholarships.

Ask about how I mentor young writers in the craft of creative writing.

Learn more about editorial work with adult clients here.

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About Lyn Hawks,owner of Success Story

LynAs a Stanford graduate, as an experienced English teacher who has coached students from competitive public and private schools with their essays, as an expert in gifted education, and as an award-winning young adult fiction author, I know what stories get the attention of universities. I help talented students use powerful storytelling strategies to share their accomplishments, personality, and character to colleges. [READ MORE...]

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Testimonials from Clients

“Mrs. Hawks' coaching highlights the individual story and encourages applicants to be authentic in their essays.”
—Rachel, Elon University


“Lyn offers rich wisdom and honesty. After working with her on my essays, I gained a greater sense of self and belief in my capabilities. Lyn was an integral part of my admission to college.”
—Henry, DePaul University graduate


"Lyn did an amazing job helping my daughter choose the best prompts that drew out her true self. Lyn was so encouraging and knew how to inspire my 17-year-old."
—Amy, parent

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