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What We Can Do in a Draft Review!

Lyn Hawks · September 29, 2020 · Leave a Comment

"The essays can be the most important components of your application."

Do you need someone to take a look at a few college application essays? Do you have a short amount of time? The Draft Review plan is for students who are strong writers and committed to revision. You might also be seeking a low-cost, high-engagement, short-term editorial … [Read more...] about What We Can Do in a Draft Review!

Filed Under: Essay Coaching, Writing Tips Tagged With: college admissions, college application, college essay, college essay tutor, essay writing

“You can’t write about that.” Actually, you can.

Lyn Hawks · September 22, 2020 · Leave a Comment

The authentic self is the soul made visible. - Sarah Ban Breathnach

Students and parents come to me with big worries started by well-meaning comments from various experts. Students and parents are worried that the topic they've chosen for an important college essay is somehow boring, typical, or wrong. Here's what they've heard: "Don't … [Read more...] about “You can’t write about that.” Actually, you can.

Filed Under: Essay Coaching, Writing Tips Tagged With: college admissions, college application, college essay, college essay tutor, essay writing

What’s Different About Success Story?

Lyn Hawks · August 30, 2020 · Leave a Comment

Encouragement Is Key When I see a certain skill strength, we capitalize on that, and we note that this skill set works. I know how essential encouragement is. I learned this from years of coaching high school students, years of receiving feedback from literary agents, … [Read more...] about What’s Different About Success Story?

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Questions to Ask a College Essay Tutor

Lyn Hawks · June 25, 2020 · Leave a Comment

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If you're searching for a college essay tutor, it helps to have a few questions in your back pocket. I have these answers ready to share even when I'm not asked, because I want potential clients to know my methods and approach. What can be accomplished with your … [Read more...] about Questions to Ask a College Essay Tutor

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It Takes A Village to Tell a Story

Lyn Hawks · June 17, 2020 · Leave a Comment

Man telling a story to a group

Anyone who knows me well knows they might one day be asked to help me build a story. I test drive the plots of my novels in the same way I help my Success Story students test drive ideas. That's because no good writer ever goes it alone. Of course there's that tragic, … [Read more...] about It Takes A Village to Tell a Story

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Should You Write Your College Essay About the Pandemic?

Lyn Hawks · May 31, 2020 · Leave a Comment

**This post includes updates since it was first written in spring 2020.** In 2020, Common App added a new, short-answer question allowing college applicants to describe their experience with the pandemic. So should you answer this optional question?  Probably. Maybe. I'm … [Read more...] about Should You Write Your College Essay About the Pandemic?

Filed Under: Writing Tips Tagged With: college application, college essay, Common App, pandemic

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About Lyn Hawks,owner of Success Story

LynAs a Stanford graduate, as an experienced English teacher who has coached students from competitive public and private schools with their essays, as an expert in gifted education, and as an award-winning young adult fiction author, I know what stories get the attention of universities. I help talented students use powerful storytelling strategies to share their accomplishments, personality, and character to colleges. [READ MORE...]

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“Mrs. Hawks' coaching highlights the individual story and encourages applicants to be authentic in their essays.”
—Rachel, Elon University


“Lyn offers rich wisdom and honesty. After working with her on my essays, I gained a greater sense of self and belief in my capabilities. Lyn was an integral part of my admission to college.”
—Henry, DePaul University graduate


"Lyn did an amazing job helping my daughter choose the best prompts that drew out her true self. Lyn was so encouraging and knew how to inspire my 17-year-old."
—Amy, parent

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